Deviant Login Shop
 Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×



Details

Submitted on
February 15, 2012
Image Size
1.5 MB
Resolution
1500×2000
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
331
Favourites
21 (who?)
Comments
16
Downloads
4
×
Flowers for you by EllenorMererid Flowers for you by EllenorMererid
crap flowers are crap

I don't care that I'm subbmitting a valentiney pic a day after valentines day but well there shouldn't be just one day to tell someone youlove them so here . . .I think.

Any how this is Ozzy giving a bunch of flowers to someone, to you maybe if you like him!:g_smile:

I'm happy with the sketch itelf and I'm happy with my line art, but I'm not happy with the colouring of it so any tips on improving is always welcomed, especially the colouring!

I hope you all like this! I shall be in my emo corner crying!

EDIT: Just wanted to make Ozzy's hair more ginger
Add a Comment:
 
:iconthatfoxfacedbastard:
This is a really great art! I love the colours you used, and the background is fabulous! If I were going to give a few tips it could be the following:
Try making your lines a bit darker. Not thicker! Just darker, at least on the face. They blend in a little bit too much.
Also I would suggest adding some darker shades to the face and eyes to make them pop out more.
One other thing I would suggest would be adding a little colour to the cheeks and lips - just a hint of rosiness, to really make the character seem alive!

Hope this helps ^ ^
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
2 out of 2 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconthatdamham:
ThatDamHam Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
woah :o cool! :D
Reply
:iconellenormererid:
EllenorMererid Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Student General Artist
waw thank you :D
Reply
:iconthatdamham:
ThatDamHam Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
No prob xD
Reply
:iconalden-the-fox:
Alden-the-Fox Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
that's nice :)
Reply
:iconellenormererid:
EllenorMererid Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student General Artist
thank you :) :D
Reply
:iconalden-the-fox:
Alden-the-Fox Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
yw :D
Reply
:iconcyanodrake:
CyanoDrake Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cute OC you've got here! I'd like to get flowers from him. :dummy:
About the coloring... I think you could work the shading, it looks a little insufficient. I would recommend you this tutorial, it's very useful: [link]
Reply
:iconellenormererid:
EllenorMererid Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Ozzy: *smiles, gives you the flowers* Hope you like them!

Thank you for the link, I'll use it and I'll keep on practiceing! hanks again!! :)
Reply
:iconcyanodrake:
CyanoDrake Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww! Thank you, Ozzy! :iconiloveitplz:

You're very welcome! :D
Reply
:iconellenormererid:
EllenorMererid Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Ozzy: You are very welcome! :) I'm glad you like them!
Reply
Add a Comment: